Hi Kids,
Here it is, guys: want to share your best story starters with the world? This is the place!
Drop your idea into the comments field and share, share, share! House points will go to the best story starter of the week, as voted by you every Monday.
Show us what you've got!
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ReplyDeleteonce there was a toy chicken called... (well this is weird but) chicky.
he was found in a toy shop by Mr Jones.............
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ReplyDeleteTry this out:
ReplyDeleteA rock smashed into the cliff wall, narrowly missing Theo's head.
"Hey!" he called out angrily "You almost killed me!"
This is from my story The Smoke Lands.
ReplyDelete'Thousands of years ago there was a mysterious land made entirely from smoke.'
he/she jumped nearly missing the narrow ledge...
ReplyDeletejackson was helping his father out with sweeping out the stable and then he notices his father leeding a new horse in though the
ReplyDeletestable jackson is so amzed by the beauty of the horse and he can not tear his eyes off it
I walk down to the shops then....
ReplyDeletea rock was found and it said "hi"...
ReplyDeleteI see you're linking your story starter to the awesomeness of Rocky, CJ.
ReplyDeleteYou still need to try and consider what makes the intro of a story interesting though.
A rock was found? Where's the description?
How about:
"Sam was most of the way down the last hill of the cross country course when he stubbed his toe against the rock.
'Ow,' said Sam.
'Ow,' said the rock.
'Hmmm,' said Sam."
A long story starter, but you wouldn't need to put the speech in necessarily, just the first sentence would do.